Crash over me

Alright, first critique ever just because this was too adorable not to!!!

I love the idea for this picture! It stood out in my inbox because of the quirky nature and excellent originality!
Overall though, this image takes alot of the attention away from L. I suggest next time brightening him up more, or perhaps putting some shin into the hair and clothes.
The white splatters were also a bit distracting, pehaps next time they should be a little softer. ^__^
*.* I love those shiny strawberries!! Great detail!
Also, I like how the purplish blue sky background contrast with the cream and stawberries so well! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/> in fact, I have no issues with the background~ 8D

Overall, great work~ 8D It got an instant fave from me~